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Buy a
one way ticket to a hidden land, stay and enjoy the dirt and sand.
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Be
given a loving flower, and have a kiss atop a tall tower.
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Have
ink etched into my body, perhaps of a summertime poppy.
·
Go on
a drive through the winding mountains, and never see a dripping fountain.
·
Watch
a drive in movie, and he’ll comment on my beauty.
·
It
wouldn’t be anything too terrific, but go on a daydream picnic.
·
Adventure
a deserted town, while I wear my floral crown.
·
Make s’mores,
one of the treats he so adores.
·
Go
stargazing, and hear the lake rhythmically waving.
I liked the way it rhymes; it makes it more like a poem. It sometimes is a bit confusing, but it is a nice piece. Good job.
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